Bring it on baby, dear
That attitude of yours
It’s a cover for your fear
Of breaking down doors
You want to be me
Go ahead and try
Open your eyes and see
It’s not a good time to fly
You’re full of yourself, hon
Step back and to the side
Let others bask in the sun
Be humble with your pride
Close your eyes; breathe a sigh
How can you change?
Start climbing; aim for high
You might feel scared or strange
When it’s the end of day
And the wind is a wickin’
Say, “I’m not afraid,” say
“I’m not a chicken!”
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13 comments:
excellent
You make a good point here.
Nicely done.
=)
Wow, I really like this. I'm going to re-read it, because it's full of meaning. It has a great rhythm too.
You have a lovely blog.
xoRobyn
All of us who have children still at home should print this out and stick it on the fridge. It is so much better than the line I used when they gave me grief--"Run away from home now, while you still KNOW EVERYTHING!!"
Fine rhythm here...I really like this...Peace and blessings
This reads beautifully. I like the meaning in the words and their flow.
Gems xxx
Very good rhyming!~Ames
Outstanding job ! Vivid feelings explored and fear confronted, I love it !!!
This is beautifully written, and such wonderful advice. I love that you took such a silly prompt and turned it on it's ear. Great use of the prompt. Kat
Very impressive effort here, Kelly! I love what you did with the prompt and the message it conveys. Great job!
Very clever!
Amazing job!! Very deep and insightful.
What a wonderfully deep message from what seems like such a shallow prompt.
You really rose and excelled in this challenge.
I'm honestly impressed.
Wow.
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